Overall I thought your essay was well put together. I would eliminate all of the extra paragraphs you included and just have it broken down into describing the two different advertisements. From what i recall the organization of your second paragraph was well developed if your concerned about the organization of the second paragraph I would just follow the same method you used in the first advertisement.
Overall I thought your essay was well put together. I would eliminate all of the extra paragraphs you included and just have it broken down into describing the two different advertisements. From what i recall the organization of your second paragraph was well developed if your concerned about the organization of the second paragraph I would just follow the same method you used in the first advertisement.
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